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Bill Adler's avatar

What a clever and fun story. I love it.

Justin Deming's avatar

Thanks so much, Bill! I’m happy you enjoyed it.

Dascha Paylor šŸ‡ØšŸ‡¦šŸšŸ»ā€ā„'s avatar

What a great story, Justin. I love the little details you throw in.

Justin Deming's avatar

Thanks so much, Dascha! I appreciate it.

Mark Starlin's avatar

Whatever works. šŸ¤“ Nicely done.

Sharron Bassano's avatar

Brilliant. Such a fine ending. I will remind my son to open the windows at my demise. I appreciate your writing style, Justin. It is spare, clean, free of hyperbole. It reminds me of my own. Ha! Thank you. New subscriber, Sharron at LEAVES.

Justin Deming's avatar

Wow, thank you so much for the kind words, Sharron! You made my day. I will now have to return the favor and check out your writing! Thanks for reading my work and for the thoughtful commentary. šŸ™

Sharron Bassano's avatar

I don't throw compliments around when it comes to English. I was an English teacher for years, but I won't send corrections. I promise. Ha Ha Ha. Lovely fresh work.

Justin Deming's avatar

Haha! Oh good, I’m happy to hear that. šŸ˜„ Thanks again.

(By the way, I’m also a teacher! Eighth grade special education.)

Kim Smyth's avatar

That was sweet, especially after the night I had, maybe I’ll try that!

Justin Deming's avatar

Thanks, Kim. Anything is worth a shot!

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Jun 6, 2022
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Justin Deming's avatar

Thanks so much, Robert. It’s pretty superstitious, but hey, who knows! I do know of nurses who practice this commonly.