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Sunil Anand's avatar

The dental clinic-

The interpol agent felt safe in the posh dental chair and opened his mouth while letting down his guard.

The anesthesia numbed his pain.

Too late he recognized the tattoo of the terrorist group he was hunting on the dental assistant.

She smiled wickedly while she plunged in the cyanide.

Justin Deming's avatar

Oh my! What an excellent story, Sunil!

Sunil Anand's avatar

I'm going through the Jason Bourne series:)

"I would stand in line for this

There's always room in life for this

Oh baby, oh baby

Then it fell apart, it fell apart

Oh baby, oh baby

Then it fell apart, it fell apart..."

Moby Extreme ways

Justin Deming's avatar

Ooh! Fun! I honestly almost wrote that there is a cinematic quality to your story…makes sense! 😀 Those are great films…I have seen a couple but have not read the novels!

Sunil Anand's avatar

Jeremy Renner takes it to another level with Bourne Legacy!

Sunil Anand's avatar

Lol! No place to run especially when you're anesthetized and strapped up...

Scott MacLeod's avatar

Travel for Dummies/Fiction

Ed’s only essentials for flying were earbuds. They didn’t need to be pricey AirPods. They were plugged into his empty pocket. But they did the trick. He attracted talkers like fleas to a hound, so he took no chances. Even a seatmate without an open mouth might be a ventriloquist.

Justin Deming's avatar

Ha! A guaranteed quiet flight—often the best way to fly! Great story, Scott. I’ll think of Ed the next time I fly. 😄

Scott MacLeod's avatar

Thx may or may not be autobiographical 😊

Sharron Bassano's avatar

A revision of a piece from 2023

ANTICIPATION, fiction

Unbridled lust flows through her trembling body as she waits. The door finally opens, and she runs to him, open-mouthed, flaming with desire. His manly arms enfold her as he whispers into her ear the words she longs to hear.

“Häagen-Dazs”? he breathes.

“Oh baby, she moans,

yes,

Yes

YES!”

Justin Deming's avatar

Haha! 🤣 This story will never lose its shine. Such a good one, Sharron. And…who doesn’t like ice cream?!

The Radical Individualist's avatar

I suppose she melted into his arms.

Bill Ferguson 🇨🇦's avatar

“Jimmy! Close your mouth when you eat,” yelled his sister Karen.

Getting no response, she went into the kitchen.

Where Jimmy usually sat was an open mouth with a foot sticking out of it. It chomped once more, then said, “You’re next.”

Karen fainted dead away.

“Perfect!” said the mouth.

Justin Deming's avatar

A fifty-word horror story! Clever and creepy…I like it! Thanks so much for sharing, Bill.

Theresa Greene's avatar

First time ever

Heard you are clever

Open mouth admirer.

Word Pad for writer

Watching ER on television,

Mind does simple division.

I don't need an emergency

Just a literary agency.

Been on Substack a year

Looking for a. new cheer

Hope you enjoy this

Can I join your list?

Thank you , Justin for the opportunity.

Justin Deming's avatar

Thanks so much for stopping by and sharing your words, Theresa! (Has it really been a year already? Wow—time flies!) You are most welcome here. Hope you have a wonderful weekend!

Theresa Greene's avatar

Thank you , Justin ! You too!

Theresa Greene's avatar

Thank you , Scott!

Thank you , Sharon !

Thank you , Kim !

Sue Cauhape's avatar

My grandson is learning how to drive his little battery-powered truck, struggling to coordinate the steering with the excelerator pedal. As he barreled toward his mother’s flock of chickens, they scattered in a wild panic which triggered excitement and a delightful wide open smile. Mischief and mayhem rule the day.

Justin Deming's avatar

Ha, I can just see his mischievous grin and absolute joy! Great story, Sue—the final line is perfect.

Sue Cauhape's avatar

Thank you, Justin. I am grateful that my daughter was filming that little episode so I can enjoy it over and over again.

Justin Deming's avatar

Aww, that's great to hear.

Sharon Hudson's avatar

Young Love~CNF

Deep in puppy love, the 12-year-olds were finally alone, behind the backstop.

First kiss, sweetly placed lips, and suddenly, “mmph!” Their braces

Locked! They tried to scream, but in vain. Fire department was called, parents arrived.

Alas! The whole school knew! Thus ended the tale of “Iron Lips.”

Justin Deming's avatar

Sharon, I absolutely adore this story because we all have those awkward stories from our childhood. And I can only imagine that the news spread like wildfire! Thank you so much for sharing!

Sharon Hudson's avatar

Not only braces did I wear, but one of those ungodly headgear contraptions…ugh! Thank you, Justin, for your comment, and for the memory-sparking prompt! I look forward to the next one!

Sharron Bassano's avatar

Ha ha ha... hey, wait a minute - you wore braces didn't you? autobiography!

Sharon Hudson's avatar

Well…it 𝙄𝙎 a slightly embellished version of a true childhood experience. 😬

Richbee's avatar

Azlan (fiction )

Enter Azlan (Malaysian = lion) den. A magical doorway in C.S. Lewis book: The Lion, The Witch and the Wardrobe to transform into movie: “The Chronicles of Narnia” mythology/folklore. This Doorway leaves the real world; enters a garden that has Lion’s power, exudes confidence, courage; knowing one’s self/path.

Kim Smyth's avatar

Popcorn Fight -fiction

Sharon sat, open-mouthed, waiting to receive and then launched at the same time as Tommy. He missed but her piece landed squarely in. He proceded to choke, but it was fake-to make her laugh. After, they sat cuddled under the blanket and finally watched the movie. Her heart was full.

Justin Deming's avatar

What a fun and sweet story, Kim! It’s heartwarming. Thank you so much for sharing!

K.C. Knouse's avatar

You draw an unforgettable image with your poem, Justin. I remember chasing fireflies as a boy.

Justin Deming's avatar

Thank you so much for reading, K.C! I have many fond memories as well. I was chasing them the other night with my son. 🙂

Sharron Bassano's avatar

Lovely poem, Justin. When you have a child, magic is definitely real!

Justin Deming's avatar

Thank you, Sharron. It really is! ✨