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Brian Reindel 👾⚔️'s avatar

Love that his conflict is not being blind, but being moved like a pawn, which leads into learning chess. Brilliant choice!

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Mark Dykeman's avatar

Hi Justin, just a short comment. I've noticed with a few of your short fiction pieces that when you introduce the protagonist by name you make a point of including first and last name. Is that a conscious choice to help quickly establish their identity?

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