I love this! The imagery is perfect. I can just see Abby and her dad in their truck. I'm wondering why she wants to harness the weather.... I'm wondering where her mom is... Looking forward to the next installment!
Thanks so much, Andrea! There are definitely a few questions to be answered! I hope all is well. I’ll be in touch soon. It’s been a crazy month over here!
I like that you never said what her wish was! I'm always on board with a story that deals with the four elements, so I can't wait to see where you take this next week!
I look forward to part 2! That's a nifty plot device the stone with the four elements working like a remote control. Have a great week, Justin, and I'm going to try and make it this Friday for the 50s.
I love this! The imagery is perfect. I can just see Abby and her dad in their truck. I'm wondering why she wants to harness the weather.... I'm wondering where her mom is... Looking forward to the next installment!
Thanks so much, Andrea! There are definitely a few questions to be answered! I hope all is well. I’ll be in touch soon. It’s been a crazy month over here!
I'm hooked. Looking forward to part 2.
I’m so happy to hear it! Thanks, Scott.
Oh, boy. She's playing with fire! More of the old man? Good one Justin!
Thanks a bunch for reading, James!
I smell trouble brewing. 😉
Cool premise Justin. Interested to see where it goes.
Thanks, Jim!
Wow, intriguing!👍
Thank you for reading!
A well-written, engaging read! Anxiously awaiting the next installment. Love how you’ve hooked us.
Thanks so much for the kind words, Amie!
Absolute magic, literally and figuratively, watching for part 2
Thank you for the kind words, Sharon! 🙏
Ah, great, the start with the lovely day and then that rock, sorta whimsical at first, but then, "She owned the weather." Good one!
Thank you so much, Sherman! I’m glad you enjoyed it!
Really liked this one: you’ve whet my whistle for Part 2
Awesome, that’s great to hear. Thanks so much, Tom! 🙏
I love the buildup in this story! I’m excited for part two!
Thank you, Jason! That makes me happy to hear!
I like that you never said what her wish was! I'm always on board with a story that deals with the four elements, so I can't wait to see where you take this next week!
I’m happy you are liking the story, Claire! Thanks so much. There are two directions I might take it...still undecided as to which way I want to go!
I usually believe that less is more. But in this case - MORE please! And make it snappy!
On it, Sharron! And thank you! 😄
I look forward to part 2! That's a nifty plot device the stone with the four elements working like a remote control. Have a great week, Justin, and I'm going to try and make it this Friday for the 50s.
Thanks so much, Brian! I hope you have a great week, too. Hope to see you Friday! 😀
Yikes, be careful what you wish for! Nice build-up Justin. Can't wait for part 2.
Thank you, Jim!