I really like the story. One observation though: You could enhance it greatly by using your own verbal brushstroke instead of " white as a ghost". Please don't take it personally. I'm on an anti-cliche crusade.
Thank you very much for the feedback, Jimmy! Not taken personally at all. I paused when writing it and kind of just surged on, but I completely agree with you. That line could have been much stronger, no question. I always appreciate hearing from ya!
That would be my luck. 🤣
A fun story, Justin.
Mine too, Mark. 🤣
Thank you so much! I appreciate it.
I really like the story. One observation though: You could enhance it greatly by using your own verbal brushstroke instead of " white as a ghost". Please don't take it personally. I'm on an anti-cliche crusade.
Thank you very much for the feedback, Jimmy! Not taken personally at all. I paused when writing it and kind of just surged on, but I completely agree with you. That line could have been much stronger, no question. I always appreciate hearing from ya!
This was really funny, and I’m not J.K.!
Haha! Thank you, Geoffrey. You made me LOL! (I don’t often use text lingo. Normally it makes me smh.)