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Geoffrey Golden's avatar

I think it’s a very polished chapter and gives us a strong sense of our main characters right off the bat, perfect for an opening. Great job!

Given the story’s POV, one question I had after reading it was whether the author was risking anything (ex. status) by being friends with Danny, and how he was handling that risk.

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Claire Walster's avatar

A novel expert! That's so exciting! Makes me want to pull out one of my dusty novels.... The tone hooked me immediately! I think it's perfect for middle grade readers. Danny's story sounds really compelling and I'd to read more!

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