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The Radical Individualist's avatar

I often wonder at the connections that we do, and don't, make.

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Justin Deming's avatar

Same here. And I often wonder about life/death, and how the two are interconnected.

Thank you very much for reading! 🙏

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

So lovely how you wove the lives of these three people together. You have such a sensitive heart, Justin, and it shows in everything you write.

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Justin Deming's avatar

That’s a compliment I will hold on to for a very long time. Thank you for your kindness, Sharron, and for reading my story!

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Meg Oolders's avatar

"They eventually spray-paint it when they both realize they want something more permanent."

Love this line. It says a lot. 💜

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Justin Deming's avatar

Thank you, my friend! 🙏

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K.C. Knouse's avatar

A touching story of intermingled spirits. I did not expect the ending. Well done, Justin.

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Justin Deming's avatar

I really appreciate it, K.C. Thanks so much for reading!

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andrea tackach's avatar

I love this story, Justin, because we see that Darrius was a good person, as evidenced by his decision to head home to surprise his little sister. And we have to believe, goodness doesn't die; it continues to shine long after we are gone. At least this is what I like to believe. Maybe Ben's hearing Darrius' voice is an omen that goodness will follow Lily and Ben as they chart their course together.

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Justin Deming's avatar

That’s what I like to think too, Andrea. Thank you, as always, for reading—and thanks for your insightful and kind words!

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Jill CampbellMason's avatar

There's a touch of nostalgia and connection beyond understanding--which is lovely!

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Justin Deming's avatar

Thanks so much, Jill. I appreciate you reading my story! 🙏

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