"I hope there are undercurrents of hope as well." As a teacher, myself, I can affirm that where there is a teacher, there is hope. It is our business, isn't it, my friend? Such a hard topic you took on. Everything about this piece works in my opinion. You told us a little more about who Justin is.
Thanks, Sharron! I agree. Being a teacher has shaped my perspective. I think “hopeful” reflects my attitude a lot of the time. And yes, it really is our business, I think. I appreciate you reading and for the positive feedback! 🙏
Thank you, Mark! If there’s anything I’ve learned as a teacher, it’s that we truly have no idea what students may have going on in their lives outside of school. It’s important for me to always keep that thought in the back of my mind.
Powerful and all too common in the real world. Really well done Justin. I'm so thankful for the empathy teachers possess and share with their students. Just one thing, if I may - vodka is odorless. Perhaps it was a cloud of cheap bourbon.
Thanks so much for reading, Uncle Scott. It is one of those sad facts of life. And is it really?! I don’t think I ever knew that about vodka. Makes sense, though. (Granted, it’s not my beverage of choice, ha!) I really appreciate the feedback. Sometimes those tiny details can make or break a story. With that said...I think an edit is in order! 😄
"I hope there are undercurrents of hope as well." As a teacher, myself, I can affirm that where there is a teacher, there is hope. It is our business, isn't it, my friend? Such a hard topic you took on. Everything about this piece works in my opinion. You told us a little more about who Justin is.
Thanks, Sharron! I agree. Being a teacher has shaped my perspective. I think “hopeful” reflects my attitude a lot of the time. And yes, it really is our business, I think. I appreciate you reading and for the positive feedback! 🙏
I always look forward to hearing your stories.
I’m just glad the student was willing to ask for help! There’s the hope.
Me too. Thanks for reading, Kim!
Great story Justin! In the times that we are in, I'm sure that is a common practice.
Thanks, Matthew! It’s a sad but true reality.
Tre is a lucky young man. Really good story and writing, Justin!
Thank you, James!
Great story. Poetry, a good teacher, and a willing student lays the foundation of hope
Very much appreciated, Jason, thank you! 🙏
We never really know what a person is dealing with. Unless we ask and they tell us. Powerful writing.
Thank you, Mark! If there’s anything I’ve learned as a teacher, it’s that we truly have no idea what students may have going on in their lives outside of school. It’s important for me to always keep that thought in the back of my mind.
"I don’t know why, but I wish Mom would sing like she used to."
Beautiful, Justin.
Thank you, Meg! I hope she sings again someday. 🎶 I believe she will.
Powerful and all too common in the real world. Really well done Justin. I'm so thankful for the empathy teachers possess and share with their students. Just one thing, if I may - vodka is odorless. Perhaps it was a cloud of cheap bourbon.
Thanks so much for reading, Uncle Scott. It is one of those sad facts of life. And is it really?! I don’t think I ever knew that about vodka. Makes sense, though. (Granted, it’s not my beverage of choice, ha!) I really appreciate the feedback. Sometimes those tiny details can make or break a story. With that said...I think an edit is in order! 😄
Thanks again!
The devil is in the details!
Lot of depth in such a quick read!
Thanks for reading, Tiffany! Much appreciated!
Well done. It's a sad fact that there are many kids who suffer silently.
Thank you, Jim. So true. I wish more were able to reach out for help when needed. There are so many factors at play.
Harrowing stuff - feels like it could be the start of something good
Thank you my feline friend!
Excellent story, I love how you got so much into just a few words.
Thanks so much, Scott!