33 Comments
author

Just Be, fiction

Lana departed for the mountains, leaving her troubles behind. When she arrived, she popped the trunk and breathed in pine—set up her canvas and easel. But then she realized she’d left her paints behind, too. A small smile surfaced.

"Just be," her mother used to say.

Lana finally listened.

Expand full comment
Jun 14Liked by Justin Deming

Ah, Justin. Yes. We are all so concerned with doing, doing, doing, and forget to just BE. Good old mom... Old people know stuff.

Expand full comment

I can confirm that. 🤣

Expand full comment

Beautiful story, Justin.

I wrote my story before reading any posts here, which is my usual method so I don't get influenced by what was written. It appears we had similar ideas but different outcomes. 🤣

Expand full comment
author

Thank you so much, Mark. I just responded below as well!

Expand full comment
Jun 14Liked by Justin Deming

EXTRAORDINARY DAYS, prose poem

Inspiration is everywhere — it’s in the rain, in the salt air, in children’s laughter.

Today we are constantly confronted with human failure. We grieve over our spiritual poverty, epidemic ignorance and pointless violence.

But we cannot let the Sting of these extraordinary days overshadow the Blessing. We’re alive. Hope lives.

Expand full comment
author

A perfect reminder, Sharron, and so elegantly written. It was a piece I needed to read. Grateful for you! Thank you for sharing. 🙏

Expand full comment

We need more like this. The fault truly does not lie in the stars, but in ourselves.

Expand full comment

So true. Why fixate on the bad? Seek out the good. Do good. Be good. Be thankful.

Expand full comment

Saucy, fiction

Chef Mia gazed at the vibrant colors of the sunset over the ocean and had an idea.

Back in her kitchen, she blended mangoes, citrus, and habaneros with onions and peppers into a sauce for escovitch fish.

With every bite, diners tasted the sea and the warmth of the sun.

Expand full comment
author

Love this, Caro!

Expand full comment
Jun 14Liked by Justin Deming

Did someone say Happy Hour?

Expand full comment

Haha! It’s 5 PM somewhere.

Expand full comment

Inspired By Nature • Fiction

Kent normally painted the browns and oranges of the Arizona desert. When he saw the beautiful greens and blues of the Slate River Passage, he had to paint it. Kent got out his paints and easel and got busy. He was so inspired he didn’t hear the bear behind him.

Expand full comment
author

Ha! We were on the same path, Mark, until the bear. 🐻 🤣 Great twist and story. I follow the same approach: write my story without reading any other responses. That’s why I love these “gatherings” so much. The outcomes can be vastly different and also very similar. It’s always fun to see where the pieces land! Thank you for sharing.

Expand full comment

My pleasure. I enjoy being part of the community and seeing the different responses.

Expand full comment

Hah! Great ending.

Expand full comment

As a River, poetry

Inspiration is the space between

River rolling kissed golden

By sun summer holding

Peaks in the palm

Of meadow glow

Melt snow

Pine willow

Sweet water mountains

Running rocks to the sea

“Take a picture”

“Make it last forever”

“Drink this”

“Remember me”

Each wild infinity

And what could be

Expand full comment
author

Breathtaking, Alex! And I appreciate the hopeful, optimistic tone. Thank you so much for sharing!

Expand full comment

Thanks Justin! Never done an exercise like this, but it was fun to try. You’ve created a great vibe around here.

Expand full comment
author

Well that’s kind of you to say! Thank you, Alex. I’m happy you enjoyed the exercise. 😊

Expand full comment

Thanks to both Justin and John for the work you do.

Here is my poem, Inspiration:

Who are we?

Who are these mammals

That imagine, reason, anticipate

Beyond any immediate need.

What might be?

What should be?

What makes a

Difference?

A dog, cat, human,

All enjoy a sunset.

They all love, I think.

But only we see hope in

A setting sun,

And imagine tomorrow.

Expand full comment
author

Beautiful!

Expand full comment

Lovely, R.I. We are on the same wavelength today

Expand full comment
Jun 15Liked by Justin Deming

low-tech inspo || CNF

The Dollar Store employee on a smoke break, scribbling in a notebook. My breath, sharp and thin, at Imogene Pass. A handwritten recipe. “Roam” by the B52’s. An acceptance letter. My 83-year-old husband’s cycling class. The crisp scent of lavender in my herb garden. An orange gel pen. Black-and-white snapshots.

Expand full comment
author

Beautiful, Amie. Your writing always inspires me. I’ve been getting in my own way lately…stress, burning out, you name it. I retreated to the woods today and feel rejuvenated. Thank you for sharing this. 🙏

Expand full comment

Lovely, Amie. Inspiration's all around us if our eyes are open.

Expand full comment
Jun 15Liked by Justin Deming

A Photograph Takes Me Away (nonfiction)

Where is the Slate River? Someplace I have never been. When I see the brook, I can feel the cool water on my calves and the rocks underfoot. I can imagine carefully stepping from one smooth flat surface to another, pants rolled up to my knees, shoes in my hand.

Expand full comment
author

Lovely work, Lia! Thank you for sharing!

Expand full comment
Jun 16Liked by Justin Deming

Lia, Your prose mentions that you've never been in the Slate River, but your writing says otherwise. About a half hour after I took this photograph, what you describe was exactly what I was doing.

Expand full comment

Wow, thanks for sharing that!

Expand full comment

The Clasp of Hands

_______

Imagine the pulse of 131 million women

hearts a relentless drumbeat

marching to the polls

eyes a storm

beside them, men they love

124 million strong

standing like sentinels

hands clasped

a tidal wave crashes

against cliffs of inequality

proclaiming change

a shout into the void

reshaping the horizon

Expand full comment
author

This is so powerful, Gloria. Every line, every detail, every image. Thank you for sharing these inspiring words! 🙏

Expand full comment