Touching story Justin. Your choice to tell it from the viewpoint of an accidental bystander really highlights how far-reaching the emotional effects of an incident like this can be.
Wow. Everything about this story radiated heat: hot car, hot emotions, the dryer at the end. So intense. 🔥
Wow, Justin. Just wow.
Great story, Justin. So glad I discovered you here on Notes.
I kept waiting, for the surprise, the twist in the ending. It didn’t happen. There’s a surprise and a good one because the impact of is strong and dare I suggest a message: that we are, indeed, all intimately interconnected.
I lived your short story. From the first words, I was wondering if she were in Texas, land of the 110 in the shade.
You did a great job with the description, even down to the "I should have ordered it on Amazon."
Another gripping human saga. Well done.
We went to Vermont and New Hampshire on vacation last year. Riding bikes across lake Champlain on a converted railway was a Vermont highlight. Both beautiful states and short drives.
Wow another great emotional story!! Sad to think that these types of events are really happening in our world!
My heart was in my mouth throughout, Justin. Another powerful read!
Wow, Justin. My heart was pounding. Thank you.
What a story, Justin! Beautifully conceived. Please add a photo of the mother of this baby being led away in handcuffs.
Woah. This was traumatic even for me as a bystander to the bystander. 😰 Powerful story, Justin.
Enjoy your time in Vermont! I'll wave to you from New Hampshire, the other side of the diagonally cut sandwich our two states make on a map. 😊
Yikes! I love your details here, like the F-o-t-L wrapped fist on a shirtless guy, and that Rita forgot what she came for. Glad they were in time.
Wow, gripping to say the least. As usual, wonderful writing Justin!
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