Aww, let's hope he gets a second chance. I love where you began and ended this story. Just enough information for your readers' heads to work with. Miles Taylour has an echo of John Lennon in his voice, don't you think? Thanks for sharing it!
Thank you so much for reading, Sharron! You know, I never thought of that voice comparison before, but I can see where you’re coming from. Thanks for listening. I’ll have to tell him you said that. It’ll make his day I’m sure! 😄
I liked the way the stranger helped the young man accept the situation. What's done is done. Often these incidents lead to an unexpected blessing (most of the time if one is open to it!).
Thanks for reading, Mark! Yeah, I left this one pretty open-ended, didn’t I? Maybe a few more details would have helped round out his character some more. I appreciate you reading! And thanks for listening—glad you liked it. 🎶
Aww, let's hope he gets a second chance. I love where you began and ended this story. Just enough information for your readers' heads to work with. Miles Taylour has an echo of John Lennon in his voice, don't you think? Thanks for sharing it!
Thank you so much for reading, Sharron! You know, I never thought of that voice comparison before, but I can see where you’re coming from. Thanks for listening. I’ll have to tell him you said that. It’ll make his day I’m sure! 😄
“What do I do?” Daniel says aloud, asking no one in particular.
Haven’t we all said that on repeat.
We certainly have! Thank you for reading. 🙏
I liked the way the stranger helped the young man accept the situation. What's done is done. Often these incidents lead to an unexpected blessing (most of the time if one is open to it!).
I completely agree with what you said regarding these incidents leading to unexpected blessings. Thank you so much for reading my work!
Great vignette, Justin. So much said about the young man's character just by his actions. I enjoyed the song too.
Thank you on both accounts, Jim! I’m glad you liked the story and the song. 🙏
"let alone turn around for the foolish passenger who will one day be late for his own funeral."
Well, this begs a lot of questions.
Good song.
Thanks for reading, Mark! Yeah, I left this one pretty open-ended, didn’t I? Maybe a few more details would have helped round out his character some more. I appreciate you reading! And thanks for listening—glad you liked it. 🎶