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Brian Reindel 👾⚔️'s avatar

This was very well written, Justin. I never felt like the story was drifting at all, and I think you chose the best path forward. There are only so many ways it could go, one or both of them dying, they get out using an escape plan instead of being given the choice, or they remain prisoners. The escape plan could have worked, but that almost guarantees a part four. I liked that you left some question as to their survival against the elements. Every part was well told -- definitely one of my favorite stories of yours.

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Kim Smyth's avatar

I enjoyed the three part story, you kept us all wanting more. I was hoping for a rescue in the end, but sometimes that isn’t real life, is it.

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