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andrea tackach's avatar

This is beautiful, Justin. I love the imagery.. The reader feels as though he/she is in the car with the narrator, contemplating his choice. I would give this story a happy ending. It would turn out that the girl is driving to see the narrator and they meet in the middle at a gas station!! There! Second chances!

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Mark Starlin's avatar

I like Andreas’s “ending.”

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