That was great. I love horror and how easy it seemed for you to create such an impactful micro story. I tend to add a lot of story line to my stories so it's hard for me to create micro stories.
Justin, this is a good one for fall! I’m forever impressed (scarred?😂) by “Something Evil” a 1972 Steven Spielberg made for TV Movie. It starts with a barn. A big old farmhouse, a sweet family, creepy neighbors... you can watch the whole thing on YouTube. But beware! 😁
I rarely write horror, so the new prompt will be a good challenge. Looking forward to it. 🧛♂️
LOVE the last line!
Yeeeps. Perfectly creepy for a dark, damp October day. Chilling last line.
Loved this micro-horror story!
I haven't tried horror as a genre so looking forward to the nudge to give it a go, Justin. This was quietly chilling. Excellent inspiration
That was great. I love horror and how easy it seemed for you to create such an impactful micro story. I tend to add a lot of story line to my stories so it's hard for me to create micro stories.
Justin, this is a good one for fall! I’m forever impressed (scarred?😂) by “Something Evil” a 1972 Steven Spielberg made for TV Movie. It starts with a barn. A big old farmhouse, a sweet family, creepy neighbors... you can watch the whole thing on YouTube. But beware! 😁
A ghostly DM. Awesome.
This would make for a great scary picture book!
If I'd known about Melinda Gray I would have gone elsewhere, too. Spooky tale!
Thank you Justin for a perfectly crafted very short horror story. A welcome distraction from the true horrors emerging from the Middle East.
Good one. You lead the reader into fearing for the teens, whereas our thoughts centre on Melinda Gray, whom no one loved and no one cares for, still.
So spooky! Love it 🖤
Perfect story for this time of the year, Justin! Just great!
EEWWWWEEEEKAAAAACCCKKBLAARGH..ICKY
My attempt at onomatopoeia for what that story just did to me. 😂
Enjoyed this.