Sadly, of the two, I'm definitely the Melanie of this story. Though I'd probably only fantasize about my rival's peanut buttered humiliation. I wouldn't have the guts to pull it off.
The peanut-butter offensive. All's fair in love and war, right? I loved this line: " ... and her flat stomach would morph into a wasteland of pudge." I can testify to this. Great story, Justin!
Right you are! Am I allowed to re-title this story? I think I like “The Peanut Butter Offensive” a lot more than the original. Thanks so much for reading, Sharron!
Oh god, I thought for sure this was going to end with the dude being allergic to peanuts and then dying. I have been reading too much dark stuff.
Clancy…this ending needs to be written! Hmm, perhaps I’ll take a walk down this path someday and see where it leads me. 😄 Thank you for reading!
Hell hath no fury...
Exactly, Jim, ha! Thanks so much for reading.
In the background “You’ve got a friend in me” played. 🤣
Haha! Now that would have been a perfect detail to include in the story. Hmm…where’s that edit button…
Thanks for reading, Mark. 😄
I love that level of petty. :)
Haha, thanks, Kim. I remember having a lot of fun writing this one.
Talk about intense.
Great read, as always man. Sorry for the double comment there!
Haha, agreed! Thanks so much for reading, Marc. And no worries at all!
Ugh. Melanie, no! Take the high road! 😂
Sadly, of the two, I'm definitely the Melanie of this story. Though I'd probably only fantasize about my rival's peanut buttered humiliation. I wouldn't have the guts to pull it off.
Haha, Melanie does have some guts, doesn’t she? Thanks for reading, Meg!
Nothin' but sour grapes
There’s a lot of truth in those four words, Mark. Thank you for reading!
Another great story !! I remember reading It when it first came out !!
Thanks, Mom! 💜 I can’t believe it’s been over four years since publishing this one.
I know it seems like it was yesterday!!
The peanut-butter offensive. All's fair in love and war, right? I loved this line: " ... and her flat stomach would morph into a wasteland of pudge." I can testify to this. Great story, Justin!
Right you are! Am I allowed to re-title this story? I think I like “The Peanut Butter Offensive” a lot more than the original. Thanks so much for reading, Sharron!
Nicely written story Justin! I know a few people I would have liked to use the pb & jelly on.
Thank you, Matthew! And haha! I suppose it’s never too late…🤣
Thank you, Matthew! And haha! I suppose it’s never too late…🤣
The heat of the story burned a hole in my screen . . .
Youch…sorry! 🤣 Thanks for reading, Sharon!