We all need guardian angels from time to time. Well done, Justin. 🤓
One proud mama!!!Love ya!!
Beautiful, touching writing ... if flash fiction could be big enough to be a page-turner, I'd have been pushing on to get to the denouement! Loved it.
PS, my 50 words are written and ready for Friday by the Fire
Wonderful story - I found myself gripping my thigh as the youngin' slid down toward the river. Great ending and I agree with Mark Starlin about guardian angels after two personal experiences.
Goodness me, Justin, this goosepimpling story has moved me to the core! Such a beautiful, BEAUTIFUL post.
Thank you so much for my favourite read of the day.
Creepy and touching at the same time. Enjoyed the read.
Looking forward to your publication launch photos!
A great story! It was gripping and intense, I had to rush through it the first time to see how it ended!
Wonderful story, Justin. The boy sliding down the ravine and into the river was absolutely chilling! I held my breath the whole time until he was rescued. Very effective writing!
Well done, Justin. I like to think that we have that connection with those that came before us.
Man, this is so good! Love the way you build pace in your writing. Even nicer to see you have the support of your mom here as well. Ms. Deming has me interested to know about the childhood events that were worked into this story.
Another fantastic story!! Love how you mingle in some of your childhood events into your stories!!Can't wait to purchase your book!!
Breathtaking story! Thank you.
Huge congratulations on your upcoming book release. 😁 Oh! What a feeling!!!
This is just enormous
Tremendous story Justin.