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I loved this! One of the reasons I read so much short fiction is that I'm addicted to ambiguity.

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Great story, Justin. I like that you left it undecided whether it was dream or real.

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Why oh why is everything so much scarier at night? I loved the alliteration of diabolical dance and the rest of the descriptions throughout were wonderful too!

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Your story reminds me of sinister nights in the Mohawk River Valley! There's something about upstate :)

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Aug 1, 2022·edited Aug 1, 2022Liked by Justin Deming

Thanks for the shout out, Justin. Glad you enjoyed my spooky little story! Nice job with your own!

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