Holy cow! Justin, this is breath-taking! You have risen to a new level with this piece. The combination of the ancient past and the future - the primitive tribe and their star-gods, just works beautifully.
"...their famished frames..." "...the reddening sky bursts with a sudden assault of color." "Stories, smacking teeth, and bloated bellies fill this corner of the universe until the sun rises." Wow!
Man! Where are those white dots now -- those Sky People, when we need them most? We don't need salmon, but the tribe of humanity sure needs help...
Mysterious action in the sky. I, too, thought of the Northern Lights, but you describe it as if it were a battle. A salmon-fishing starship, how inventive of you. I wonder if it kept any of the catch for the trip home?
How appropriate with all the Northern Lights photos going around. I haven't been hit by salmon, though.
Haha! I too have avoided the falling salmon. Thank you for reading, my friend.
Holy cow! Justin, this is breath-taking! You have risen to a new level with this piece. The combination of the ancient past and the future - the primitive tribe and their star-gods, just works beautifully.
"...their famished frames..." "...the reddening sky bursts with a sudden assault of color." "Stories, smacking teeth, and bloated bellies fill this corner of the universe until the sun rises." Wow!
Man! Where are those white dots now -- those Sky People, when we need them most? We don't need salmon, but the tribe of humanity sure needs help...
Thank you so much, Sharron! I had a lot of fun writing this one. And I couldn’t agree more with you. We could certainly use a hand!
I liked it. I think you did a good job. I very rarely write Sci-Fi as well but it can be fun.
Thanks for reading, Pennie!
It was my pleasure.
Mysterious action in the sky. I, too, thought of the Northern Lights, but you describe it as if it were a battle. A salmon-fishing starship, how inventive of you. I wonder if it kept any of the catch for the trip home?
Thank you so much for reading my story, K.C. I love your question. I also wonder if this particular alien race saw something in us worth saving?
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Great story as always!!! So talented!!Always look forward to more!!
Thanks, Mom. I’m glad you liked this one even if it was a bit out there. 👽 😄