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All the time I wonder. Then I remember how blessed I am, and how I wouldn't change my present circumstances. Slipping into an alternate reality for a short while would make for an exciting adventure though 😁

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Life is a billion zillion little and big decisions. And each one has the potential to completely alter our lives.

Great lesson in a compact story, Justin.

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Jun 13, 2022·edited Jun 14, 2022Liked by Justin Deming

Thanks Justin. I love this idea of "what if". I had a steady job for thirteen years that just barely kept my boy and me alive. I hated every minute of it. I dreaded going to work every day. One day I just spontaneously gave notice. Brave? Foolish? It took me less than six months to find my direction, my identity. I never regretted my decision once. If I hadn't quit, I never would have known what I was capable of -- which was so much more than I imagined. Some times we just have to take a risk. Sharron at Leaves.

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"Brevin Townes slipped into an alternate reality one morning while walking his dog" is a great opening sentence.

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I love the way you use Chips to ratchet up the tension in the story. I read with the image of a confused, lonely dog in the back of mind and was so relieved when everyone was reunited! Great story!

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In my experience, everyone wonders “what if” at some point in their lives, even the most happy and successful people.

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Great story, I love this concept! Yes, I have considered how my life would be different had I been allowed to join the Navy and go to Italy like my dad always hoped I would. Instead, I joined the Army and was not told when the letter of acceptance came to my parents house. Would I have met someone different, never had my loving husband and kids? Of course. So for that reason, I wouldn’t want to change anything 😀

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